Wednesday, 11 March 2015

P23- Updated script

Final script


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After evaluating and analysing my draft I have found that it was difficult to read as the 'cue in/outs' where not precise therefore I have updated my script and shown clearly when the cue begins and when it ends. I have also changed how I introduce the interviews I have taken, before I did not introduce my interviews and now I have with sohisticated language.